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Friday, March 1, 2019

Ahoy Waitangi Moment in Time


Moment in time
    12.02.19
GURGLE GURGLE!!!
I could feel my agitated stomach rumble like the SOUND of fireworks being set off. My heavy gear made me slump in my chair well  desperately holding on to the slippery metal poles. I was not having fun at  all I felt flabbergasted. I thought I was gonna  drown. The motor engine sounded GASTLY!!! After ages of not having fun I felt like I could FINALLY have fun.
By Caedance

2 comments:

  1. Wow Caedance! What an awesome piece of writing. You have used so many amazing descriptive words that help the reader paint a picture in their head. I felt like I was there with you!

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