Camp writing 2018 - draft

My mind was filled    with curiosity of what the ride would do. would I be horrified? Or will Would it it be exciting? ... There was nothing but silence and a bit of shrill screams from the distance I could not taste anything but the bitter air. Just when it looked like a dead end I was trying to get out. Whooosh we turned sharply onto a new part of the track. Out of nowhere a dark figure came straight out at us. Ahh I screamed like a surprised horse I’m glad that's over but oh no there is something bad coming. It’s a hill bump chugga chugga bump chugga chugga.I am going to warn you guys to get ready to stop shouted Mrs Davan. Worry had hit me suddenly I started worrying that we were going to stop on the hill and roll backwards. I  desperatly wanted to get of but after the hill ... a pang of relieve flowed over me like a river. Then whee we were going down the hill. Then when I was least expecting it we had stopped at a hault it nearly made me fall out of the cart because the bar was far away from my stomach!! After the ride stopped I loved so we did it twice more. screaming from the distance. I could not taste. in the corner of the photo you can see gold rush.

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